I outlined the first 5 scenes of the Sorcerer , and then I decided to start writing. When I started writing, the words that I typed was in first, not third like the old version. I considered it, and decded that it felt right to tell it in first. And, the opening is SO much better now. It is more organic, for starters. That isn’t the only change. I read the opening scene of the Raven Mocker, and was reminded of how much I love that story. In fact, I have changed my mind about self publishing the Magi CIS stories, I want to make an attempt to find a publisher first. Why? Because I think they are good enough to sell to a publisher. It might be that I am wrong, but I wont know that until I have tried. 🙂