Back to the drawing table
So. Yesterday I took a look at the synopsis. And I was a bit appalled to discover that there were plot holes big enough to poke my head through. I knew that the end was missing when I started writing, but I had planned to reach the point were the first draft stops before I outlined it.
This might sound odd, but I am glad this happened, since I suspect I have to cut the words I have written. The easy explaination is that the heroine is meek. Which she isn’t. She has been a merc, and she is used to tough investigations.
Also, there is no tension. Which it should be, since she is undercover, surrounded with people who doesn’t like her. I think one problem is that I started the story in the wrong place, but I am not sure what the right place is.